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Don't Pop My Bubble

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Self-portrait
Taken: March 2014

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Image size
1572x1572px 600.27 KB
Make
Canon
Model
Canon PowerShot SX20 IS
Shutter Speed
1/30 second
Aperture
F/2.8
Focal Length
5 mm
ISO Speed
100
Date Taken
Mar 14, 2014, 11:52:18 PM
Sensor Size
6mm
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:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star: Technique
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

I like the lighting and the shadows in the base image. The overlay has a nice texture that I would love to see on your back rather than on your bra. The hat casts nice shadows on your face but it doesn't help the picture to tell a story. I look at this and I see the beauty of your figure, overlaid with color and texture and circled with neon. I wonder what you are trying to convey with the additions. If I were writing a summary of this image I would call it "Greek sailor evading the Gym". The neon circles, while they do draw attention to the center, don't really add to the story. I hope this didn't pop your bubble.